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One of my stories...
« on: January 10, 2005, 08:03:09 pm »
I did this in under 2 hrs and 30 mins. And it was the break of dawn while i was doing it too. ^_^ not ask!!!

Note: I would like some feedback from this so Read & Review. Give me some input on how i can do better or praise me for my writing. ^_^


A Sunset Romance

It was a calm evening. The pier seemed somewhat busy in the morning but became packed just when afternoon passed. It usually gets packed at this time. Furs and humans come within a 100-mile radius to go to this pier. It seemed to be the ultimate hangout for teens and the perfect romantic for couples. The sun dipped into the ocean every 10 seconds slipping slowly into a 13-hour sleep.

A red fox by the age of 20 watched the dazzling sunset front row center. He leaned against the rail facing the deep blue. He loved watching the ocean. It always seemed to calm him whenever there was trouble passing by. He tapped his claws on the metal pipe looking at his watch every 3 seconds.

Where is he?

He looked around slightly nervous hoping that his mate didn