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College essay-feedback appreciated!
« on: December 02, 2014, 07:49:39 am »
I'm working on college applications right now, and I have an essay written for the Common App, but I would appreciate it if some of you would look it over for me. I'm having my English teacher look it over, but I also thought it might be a good idea to have some people who don't know me so well look over it in order to get a different perspective. If anyone would be willing to edit it, please let me know and I'll send it to you via e-mail. (I don't want to upload the actual text here because I was told that plagiarism detectors will pick it up and flag my essay as having been plagiarazed, even though it's my writing on my account. I don't want to risk it because they'll throw out your application if they even suspect it's been plagiarized.) Proofreading and/or content/rhetoric editing would be wonderful.
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Re: College essay-feedback appreciated!
« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2014, 08:10:06 am »
Pester me and I'll have a look if I have time
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