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Comics/Art
« on: February 25, 2015, 12:14:23 am »
I'm making comics... Gonna post them here so you all can read them and prepare myself for tumblr lolwut. So far the only people who will be in them are: Siv, Skyy, flufflez25 , and myself. Enjoy! (you may have to go through the pages to see them.

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Re: Comics
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2015, 01:13:12 pm »
That ones simple but funny, I liked it and the art looks good :fox-:): can't wait to see some more :fox-:):
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Re: Comics
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2015, 02:49:14 pm »
I love them!  :lol-fox: And I really like the style too. Cant wait for more ^^ ( like honestly, I love it  :fox-;): )


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Re: Comics
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2015, 04:06:37 pm »
Love the art style. Really, amazing.

                 
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Re: Comics
« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2015, 05:11:36 am »
Here's another comic! Thanks for the support guys <3



I was asking if I could use Skyy in my comics, but I'm not good at asking people I barley know for things Or asking for things in general |D. This is pretty much what happened. More comics to come!

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Re: Comics
« Reply #5 on: February 26, 2015, 12:55:08 pm »
lol!  :lol-fox:
It's so good ^^ Dont worry about the shading, I think it's pretty good  :fox-:P: I love you'r artstyle ^^


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Re: Comics
« Reply #6 on: February 26, 2015, 01:39:13 pm »
In general, I like the comics, and the jokes are pretty good for 4 panel comics.

Few points of critique (based from a ton of webcomics I've rewd in the past)
- consider doing a horizontal layout of panels instead of vertical, could lead to playing around with frame sizes
- panel sizes are very static. If you look at a number of 4 panel strips, not all comics keep the same layout with their panels in order to creat a contrast, or something more pleasing for the reader
-try never to copy and paste exact characters. Especially in the 2nd strip with the first two panels. Each panel is supposed to show either a change in emotion for each character  (or in certain cases a change of angle/foreshadowing).
- For the first strip, you should be more exaggerated in contrasts of the "going to bed" aspect. The darkness is a bit too dark, and the light in the first few strips seem osadly placed. I'd consider making panel be light before the first character goes to bed (apologies I don't know names of characters) and dark once the second character goes to bed, but not as dark as you made itn(cause it's hard to read)
-for the second strip, try more dynamic angles for the panels instead of just upper body drawings.

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Re: Comics
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2015, 01:42:25 pm »
These are really well thought out comics. There're really good looking doodles ^-^. You're cell shading looks great.

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Re: Comics
« Reply #8 on: February 27, 2015, 01:25:29 am »
I know it's not a comic. But I didn't feel the need for making a new art thread for the stuff that isn't comics soooo, I'm gonna post this here. Animation took me all day! But I love this character so it was worth it. vent art hehehe



I will post a comic either later tonight or tomorrow so stay tuned! <3

Also quick little thank yous:
@Eriadam and @LonaLove Thank you! Shading is very difficult for me, but practice makes perfect huehuehue.

@MessedThoughts I see what you mean, your tips are very helpful and I'll try to better myself! However I wont be able to do the horizontal comics because the program (Manga Studio) I use doesn't have any horizontal layouts for me to use unfortunately, and I'm terrible with spacing. Thank you! <3
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Re: Comics
« Reply #9 on: February 27, 2015, 06:41:32 am »
That's a pretty animation  :lol-fox: What is the name of this character? (sowwie for my lack of knowledge).

Anyway, can't wait for new comic ^^


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Re: Comics
« Reply #10 on: February 27, 2015, 08:23:21 am »
Adorable ^w^

I'm looking forward to some more !
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Re: Comics
« Reply #11 on: February 27, 2015, 11:06:03 am »
This is awesome omg !!

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Re: Comics
« Reply #12 on: February 27, 2015, 01:23:38 pm »
Awesome!!  Can't wait for more
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Re: Comics
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2015, 03:06:59 am »

I was thirsty O:
Sorry for taking so long! More to come ^-^
(Plus more animations since you guys seemed to like the last one I did.)

@Eriadam Thank you! Her name is Marrie no need to be sorry! I never specified o//v//o

The characters names are Sock (the brown corgi drinking out of the sink), Haley (the monochrome dog in the second frame), Siv (the grey fox with the brown hair cuddling with the otter), And Skyy (the otter cuddling with the fox). Hope that's clears up some of the character confusion- sorry for the sloppy post o//v//o


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Re: Comics
« Reply #14 on: March 01, 2015, 04:22:13 am »
LOL!  :lol-fox:

I can't put in words how I adore you'r comics! Simply awesome!  :fox-:P:

There is just something I love in you'r artstyle ( and also humor in comics x3 ).

Another great job!


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Re: Comics
« Reply #15 on: March 01, 2015, 11:02:01 am »
Great job with the comic, i really like the joke especially since i can relate to it.

I feel though that there isn't enough of a comedic tension between the 3rd and 4th panel. I feel like there needs to be some sort of indication of a thought or a pause for sock, something like just a blank panel with no words where sock is just looking at the sink. I think that would be 100% possible. As well, i am not really sure if there is a need for a cutaway to the group of people in the second panel, because they don't really serve any purpose to developing the plot aside from that one line, which can be said off the strip.

As an aside (im not sure if i am the only one who noticed this) but the 4th panel looks a bit, awkward. I can't exactly put my finger on what it is though (might be perspective?)

I really hope my words don't discourage you. they are good comics.
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Re: Comics
« Reply #16 on: March 01, 2015, 08:54:05 pm »
@MessedThoughts No no! You're words are very helpful. I appreciate that you're giving me these tips so I can make my comics better to be honest. I'm glad you like them, and the tips are useful- I was hoping someome would be able to share their thoughts about it! Thanks!

Also @Eriadam, thanks! I really appreciate how much you've been supporting me <3

means a lot to see other people liking the thing I enjoy doing. Love you guys!

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Re: Comics
« Reply #17 on: March 01, 2015, 09:12:18 pm »
Cute, and funny... I like em!
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Re: Comics
« Reply #18 on: March 02, 2015, 07:45:42 am »
NEEDZ MOAR!!!

Caps aside, you do a really go job with humor. I mean, it's the everyday stupid things that we can relate to that makes us laugh because of how accurate they are. Also, I'm failing at creating a good comment at the moment, freaking brainfarts.

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Re: Comics
« Reply #19 on: March 04, 2015, 06:00:38 am »

This one was made with Tachun and Calyx's fursonas. I didn't feel like shading cause the grass took me forever, sorry bout that ^^'
I usually have a hard time talking to strangers irl so o//v//o
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