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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #120 on: August 04, 2018, 11:16:02 pm »
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I think it looks fantastic!  Something about the jaw seems off though, maybe his face needs to go back a bit?  Also the eye on the left seems a tiny bit weird, but it might just be me

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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #121 on: August 07, 2018, 04:28:29 am »
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critiques?
ok gonna start with saying how much I love this piece of art. I think the pose and expression are on point, they give a lot of feel to the character. The soft textured brush strokes are nice too, but that also means that a couple places where you've added highlight stick out a tad. The left side of his face, both knees, and shoulder a bit all seem a little glaring. At the same time, it did take me a full minute of staring to notice those because the piece overall is awesome.
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #122 on: August 07, 2018, 11:21:01 am »
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critiques?
ok gonna start with saying how much I love this piece of art. I think the pose and expression are on point, they give a lot of feel to the character. The soft textured brush strokes are nice too, but that also means that a couple places where you've added highlight stick out a tad. The left side of his face, both knees, and shoulder a bit all seem a little glaring. At the same time, it did take me a full minute of staring to notice those because the piece overall is awesome.

Thank you, I'll work on that!
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #123 on: August 09, 2018, 01:10:42 pm »


Ayyyyy can someone critique my newest thing?
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #124 on: August 10, 2018, 03:23:05 pm »
I found this to be really inspiring:

https://youtu.be/OUZ7R7AdIiI
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #125 on: August 11, 2018, 11:48:21 am »
I've been sketching traditionally and then taking a picture to trace over it digitally lately. I think it's helping a bit. Also, I've been doing some comic page concepts and thumbnailing is working wonders.
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #126 on: August 18, 2018, 11:23:25 am »


Ayyyyy can someone critique my newest thing?
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #127 on: August 18, 2018, 04:03:21 pm »
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #128 on: August 18, 2018, 05:16:25 pm »
Hey, can anyone critique my art? I'm feeling bad about it lately and want to improve.
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #129 on: August 19, 2018, 10:15:49 pm »
Hey, can anyone critique my art? I'm feeling bad about it lately and want to improve.

I could try, is there a specific piece you'd like me to do?
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #130 on: September 17, 2018, 08:42:50 am »


What can I do to improve this?

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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #131 on: September 17, 2018, 11:41:06 am »


What can I do to improve this?

Don't go easy on me, I can handle it and I need to improve.

I'd say work on shading, and the eyes look dull. Take a page from Fuyusfox or Emala Jiss online when it comes to making the eyes look shiny.

http://fav.me/d8kitq4  Take a good look at the eyes then try the technique out.
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #132 on: September 17, 2018, 12:08:26 pm »


What can I do to improve this?

Don't go easy on me, I can handle it and I need to improve.

I think it looks cute and I like the subtle shading but something feels off, other than the fact he has no shoulders which maybe he's not suppose to have anyway ^^'' but I think its his eyes, can't quite tell may be his blank stare? for future reference try having the eyes look elsewhere, looking at the viewer can look good but when facing forward it tend to look creepy and lifeless. Also maybe try outlining only some parts of the eyes or changing the color of the lines at least, atm the lines are too dark and thick so kinda distracting. The muzzle could also be a little higher up to look less droopy but that just me ^^
Another tip is making the ears a little wider and more triangular since coyotes like foxes have big triangular ears ^^

These are all just personal preferences though, you don't have to follow any of then if you don't want to! I highly suggest studying from life(using photo references and such) and to experiment with things! ^^
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #133 on: September 17, 2018, 12:13:59 pm »


What can I do to improve this?

Don't go easy on me, I can handle it and I need to improve.

I think it looks cute and I like the subtle shading but something feels off, other than the fact he has no shoulders which maybe he's not suppose to have anyway ^^'' but I think its his eyes, can't quite tell may be his blank stare? for future reference try having the eyes look elsewhere, looking at the viewer can look good but when facing forward it tend to look creepy and lifeless. Also maybe try outlining only some parts of the eyes or changing the color of the lines at least, atm the lines are too dark and thick so kinda distracting. The muzzle could also be a little higher up to look less droopy but that just me ^^
Another tip is making the ears a little wider and more triangular since coyotes like foxes have big triangular ears ^^

These are all just personal preferences though, you don't have to follow any of then if you don't want to! I highly suggest studying from life(using photo references and such) and to experiment with things! ^^

Also, since it's a wolf and/or doggo, if the eyes are gonna stare directly into the camera/at the viewer, at least make them look big and cute
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #134 on: September 17, 2018, 12:20:21 pm »
Thank you both for the help!

The eyes were definitely something I thought looked funny, I'll work on making them more lively next time.
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