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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #120 on: August 04, 2018, 11:16:02 pm »
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I think it looks fantastic!  Something about the jaw seems off though, maybe his face needs to go back a bit?  Also the eye on the left seems a tiny bit weird, but it might just be me

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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #121 on: August 07, 2018, 04:28:29 am »
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critiques?
ok gonna start with saying how much I love this piece of art. I think the pose and expression are on point, they give a lot of feel to the character. The soft textured brush strokes are nice too, but that also means that a couple places where you've added highlight stick out a tad. The left side of his face, both knees, and shoulder a bit all seem a little glaring. At the same time, it did take me a full minute of staring to notice those because the piece overall is awesome.
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #122 on: August 07, 2018, 11:21:01 am »
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critiques?
ok gonna start with saying how much I love this piece of art. I think the pose and expression are on point, they give a lot of feel to the character. The soft textured brush strokes are nice too, but that also means that a couple places where you've added highlight stick out a tad. The left side of his face, both knees, and shoulder a bit all seem a little glaring. At the same time, it did take me a full minute of staring to notice those because the piece overall is awesome.

Thank you, I'll work on that!
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #123 on: August 09, 2018, 01:10:42 pm »


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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #124 on: August 10, 2018, 03:23:05 pm »
I found this to be really inspiring:

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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #125 on: August 11, 2018, 11:48:21 am »
I've been sketching traditionally and then taking a picture to trace over it digitally lately. I think it's helping a bit. Also, I've been doing some comic page concepts and thumbnailing is working wonders.
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