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Offline Hahgoot

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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #140 on: January 26, 2019, 08:12:57 pm »
Hello! Could somebody please critique this?
Please give me hardcore critique and don't be afraid to be harsh, I'm not easily offended and I really want to improve >:0



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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #141 on: January 26, 2019, 08:21:34 pm »
Hello! Could somebody please critique this?
Please give me hardcore critique and don't be afraid to be harsh, I'm not easily offended and I really want to improve >:0



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this is a pretty good piece! I'm not great at art yet but some simple line clean up coukd go a really long way for this i think a little bit of symmetry work would def help!
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #142 on: January 26, 2019, 08:36:04 pm »
Hello! Could somebody please critique this?
Please give me hardcore critique and don't be afraid to be harsh, I'm not easily offended and I really want to improve >:0



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I think it looks great, however, the shading could use a bit of work.
Here is a tutorial I find useful https://www.deviantart.com/tamberella/art/Giant-Shading-Tutorial-251104611
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #143 on: January 26, 2019, 09:05:21 pm »
Thanks for the help!
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Re: Artistic Advice Thread.
« Reply #144 on: April 08, 2019, 12:25:29 pm »
Hello! Could somebody please critique this?
Please give me hardcore critique and don't be afraid to be harsh, I'm not easily offended and I really want to improve >:0



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the only thing i have to comment on is the shading and eyes

they're a little off kilter looking???

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