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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #40 on: October 22, 2014, 08:26:11 am »
I wrote this for english, but It was wrong..?

Lenore
A child, Rare and Radiant
Beautiful Maiden
Darling, sweet, for evermore

Her face, a dark gradient
A young soul taken
This wrongful death uncalled for.

Overwhelmed, scared, and shaken
I'm clutched by remorse
Hours cherished unlike before.

Time won’t flow back if my tears
Flow forth. Its futile
To cry; my love is no more

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #41 on: October 22, 2014, 10:57:30 am »
I'm bored my head hurts
I have to do my homework now
By for now Furry Teens


Was this right ?
I got another one


The book I'm reading is beautiful
It's a mind-game about a new society
But its sadly not realizable
I'll build a better world someday

一个人的鬼。

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #42 on: October 22, 2014, 06:18:45 pm »
Sense you both have asked,
Nether of you got it right.
Sorry to say so.

Count the syllables,              5
first line, five. Next, seven    7
and the last is five.              5
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #43 on: October 22, 2014, 06:26:02 pm »
I cannot Haiku
I can't get them right ever
Irony is dumb.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #44 on: October 23, 2014, 12:40:46 am »
Irony falls flat,
when forced and bent to fit in,
like water, it flows.

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #45 on: October 25, 2014, 12:46:01 am »
I am the shadow,
the one hiding in plain sight.
And yet, you can't see.

I am the whisper,
the one speaking in your ear.
And yet, you don't here.

I am that feeling,
the one giving you Goosebumps.
And yet, you don't feel.

And yet you deny me,
you deny my existence.
Why? I could help you..

Ok, I have no idea where that came from.. just started writing and this is what happened.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #46 on: October 25, 2014, 01:03:31 am »
A shadow lingers,
at the far reaches of minds,
watching and waiting.

The anti of light,
the comforting simple dark,
It envelops you.

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #47 on: November 04, 2014, 10:54:00 pm »
I would write Haiku's,
But I lack inspiration.
...... refrigerator?.......

...Faithfull, I don't think poetry is your strong point. Let me try.

Clear the mind of thoughts,
Inspiration will arrive.
Be still, look inside.


OK.....

Fa-Re-Me-La-Sol
That is what I see in me,
Musics from the heart.

ehh.....better..
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #48 on: November 04, 2014, 11:16:04 pm »
Come now, dear faithful,
Clear your mind of busy thoughts,
Let the words flow free


A ripe summer day,
See as twilight is fading,
And night encroaches


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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #49 on: November 05, 2014, 12:44:04 am »
I have spent hours,                                      side note: this is my 700th post :lol-fox:
Looking for what you spoke of.
I looked for nothing.

I've searched for nothing,
and my efforts weren't in vain.
I have found nothing.

I've practiced nothing,
And I have mastered nothing.
I have mastered zen.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #50 on: November 05, 2014, 09:25:27 am »
Yet do words not come,
In your state of peaceful zen,
In your tranquil thoughts?

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #51 on: November 05, 2014, 12:16:21 pm »
Haikus are so easy
But sometimes they don’t make sense
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Be who you are and find the ones you truly love.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #52 on: November 05, 2014, 01:46:47 pm »
Yet do words not come,
In your state of peaceful zen,
In your tranquil thoughts?
I mastered zen, and so nothing was my inspiration. I thought of nothing and so nothing came.  :fox-;):

The words that have come,
Are the thoughts now in my head,
Nothing is in there.

All my head contains,
Is nothing, so I wrote it.
Nothing is peaceful.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #53 on: November 06, 2014, 08:40:13 am »
My head is too cramped
With ideas, nothing right.
Nothing wrong either.

So what, I'm cluttered?
Achieving zen is a fight
But the poems right.

How do you do it??

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #54 on: November 06, 2014, 09:49:42 am »
We are proud furries
We are creative people
We stand proud with fur!
I consider myself a lone wolf, but I don't mind a friend or two to talk with. I also happen to be a writer.

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #55 on: November 08, 2014, 12:30:05 pm »
No, I can't Haiku;
It's much too complicated.
Why do you ask? Wait . . .
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #56 on: November 12, 2014, 01:16:40 am »
Advice on living,
From the mind of a Tiger.
Breath, focus, think, act.

Life pushes you down?
Roll over, look at the stars.
Life showed you those stars.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #57 on: November 12, 2014, 04:13:41 pm »
I can make haiku
It is really amazing
What haiku can do
I consider myself a lone wolf, but I don't mind a friend or two to talk with. I also happen to be a writer.

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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #58 on: November 13, 2014, 01:23:34 pm »
I like to eat pie
do you like to eat pie
I like pumpkin best
Be who you are and find the ones you truly love.
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Re: Can you Haiku?
« Reply #59 on: November 18, 2014, 06:28:11 pm »
Time, it eats all things.
 Plants, stone, kings, mentality.
Time, this too shall pass.
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