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Need Help with Essay.
« on: September 30, 2015, 10:38:18 am »
Hey, I need some help writing an essay on google documents.

Its in MLA Format, and its about the Storys Young Goodman Brown, and the Scarlet Letter. I have to prove a theme and the theme I chose was, "Human nature is free will, and that free will will sometimes lead us to do things that we do or do not wish to do." I can add whoever would like to help through email, Im just looking for feedback notes and even help. Its due by Oct. 14 and am very worried to to this is 75% of my English Grade.
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Re: Need Help with Essay.
« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2015, 02:54:26 pm »
I can suggest some things you could mention in the essay if that will help

 "Human nature is free will, and that free will will sometimes lead us to do things that we do or do not wish to do."

The first way to tackle this topic is by the pespective of work. Animals, which are different from humans will only ''work'' in terms of collecting food etc. For basic survival etc. While human due to his free will will work to achieve his dreams, ambitions. You could present an example of things people create purely for that purpose. Yet we dont always want to work for something. We could want it right away. But the thing that is between what we want, and what we have is the said work.

If I think of something more I'll PM you~




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Re: Need Help with Essay.
« Reply #2 on: September 30, 2015, 05:01:34 pm »
I could add you too google dox so you can see what I have if youd like?
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Re: Need Help with Essay.
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2015, 01:03:23 am »
English isnt my native language, so I cant provide help in that way since Im still learning. I can only suggest some ideas that will pop in my head, sorry


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Re: Need Help with Essay.
« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2015, 11:35:10 am »
I'd be willing to help you edit it, if you want. I like doing that kind of thing.
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Re: Need Help with Essay.
« Reply #5 on: October 01, 2015, 01:33:15 pm »
Sure! if you want just pm me your email so I can ad you on it
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