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Offline Nova Bryte

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Nova's Poems, Stories, and Ramblings Dump
« on: October 09, 2016, 10:32:46 am »
I just wanted to share a poem I wrote recently. If you like it, please tell me so I can post more  :lol-fox:


Eclipse

Once I knew a girl
Who wove sunbeams into her hair
She danced on the clouds
Her feet twirled on air
Once I knew a boy
Who carried the moon on his back
He had stars in his eyes
His soul was jet black
Night and Day were their names
And it was their destiny
Forever distant lovers to be

For while one ruled over Earth
The other lay fast asleep
Never to meet, never to part
One was the shore, the other the sea

Their tears were shed over loneliness
"Woe" they shouted to the sky
So close and so far
They let out a mournful sigh

But to their delight
There's another like me
An eclipse, a fleeting kiss
Over a shadowed willow tree
Forever distant lover to be





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Offline Lucius.

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Re: Nova's Poems, Stories, and Ramblings Dump
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2016, 10:38:55 am »
Very good. Eclipse/10.
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Re: Nova's Poems, Stories, and Ramblings Dump
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2016, 11:03:24 am »
(You'll come to realize that the word "eclipse" is something of an FT meme... don't worry about it too much.)

Great poem- I loved how you described the two in the first stanza, it was really captivating.
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