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Dyno's Literature Thread.
« on: December 25, 2016, 01:48:10 am »
A haiku of sadness

Tears roll down my face
I'm looking in the mirror
I see a disgrace


Filled with frustration
There is nothing that can help
The despair that grows


For there is no love
For one who can't love himself
Tears roll down my face


The black fox

There once was a lonely fox
Who felt like he was trapped in a box
He was filled with sadness
He was driven to madness
And then he fell down to the rocks.

Low tide, low mood

Oceans
Feeling so blue
It's like a metaphor
For the feelings that one could have
Termoil
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #1 on: December 25, 2016, 02:36:22 am »
Nice poems, I really like your style of writing. I can feel the emotion in them, which makes them feel more real to the reader (if that makes sense)
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #2 on: December 25, 2016, 10:29:52 am »
Joyous Christmas

On this day of giving, I feel like I was given the greatest gift of all.
Tis the season between spring and fall
It's not certain
but it couldn't be hurtin'
This just might be what I need to get past that wall.

A secret

I'm saying it right now, so it's not much of a secret.
The vaugueness in more words protect my confidence.
It makes it hard to know.
So I don't have to put up a show.
I may be saying it, but I'm pretty discreet.

It's easy to guess, and that's what I count on.
I honestly thought that this feeling was gone.
It's fun to repeat.
As you bring me to my feet.
And by your lovely face, my eyes will greet.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #3 on: December 25, 2016, 11:40:23 am »
I read it as if it was a rap lol... Its good tho
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2016, 05:41:20 am »
Sorry
Embarassed
Loathsome
Foolish
Idiotic
Self
Hatred

Reeling in feeling

Laying in his bed, staring at the fan
Spiraling, the descent into a pit of darkness
Thoughts graze, the worries haze
Such a mood is one to amaze

So sleepy yet restless
A situation seem messless
Many friends left guessless
Many words left confessless

Love, a wonderful gift
Love, a terrible curse
Succeeding can lift
Failing is even worse

It's not your fault, it's mine
I just have too much time
Sorry to bother you
I'll be just fine

I'm just tired
Emotions feel fired
Breaking at every breach
Something too far to reach

If it's there, why can't I have it
just out of my grasp in terrible defeat
A terrible fate is to meet
Sometimes close but never complete

A dozen a dime
Mocking me from afar
Have I committed some crime
Maybe it's a matter of... Paradigm.

3 am REM

Partial silence
Save electrical whirrs
Car engine purrs
Air flow whistles
Toothbrush bristles

In a dream
Or as it would seem
Quite the fright
In the middle of the night
When I wake up I'll be alright

Pleasent thoughts
Some scenic shots
Feeling warm
At risk of a storm
How my wishes take form

Being held
Feeling compelled
To hold them back
It's a dream snack
Until I go back

Just wake up
It's a shake up
Take up
Break up
Make up

Gone from that place
Sadness runs across my face
My mind's special treat
For once something neat
Why did my subconscious retreat
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #5 on: December 29, 2016, 01:45:17 am »
Facepaw

This fox made a terrible mistake
The thought of it makes him ache
Words spoken from his maw
Made him have a big facepaw
This fox just can't catch a break.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #6 on: December 30, 2016, 03:17:43 am »
Painful sympathy

Hands shaking
Heart stopping
Rising fears
Bursting in tears

It's not even me
But that's not what I see
To have to die
It makes me cry

A golden light
A false delight
To get us through
Try walking in their shoes

Why just why
I can't get by
With a world like this
Ignorance was bliss

I knew it
But it didn't fit
Couldn't accept it
Lost all my wit
Sad dispair and sorrow
There truly is no tomorrow
For my heart has dropped
Into a bottomless pit

So painful
I need help
Not to change
Not to derange
But to erase
That is the case

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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #7 on: January 02, 2017, 05:24:32 pm »
A thought of affliction

It feels good to find out, but worse to know
This answer I thought would never show
I thought it would help but it is my foe
A never ending battle to find the finish
But a heavy weight I must tow

A plague in my mind
Is a drag I will find
Frag my emotions
Cause such a commotion

And for what
A line I can't cut
Blocking my path
Feeling it's wrath

If there was a way
I hope to find it some day
With little effort please
So I don't succumb to this disease

There's a place I know
Over the rainbow
Beyond the clouds
Hidden in a shroud

A different place
To reach is a race
Where the end is not clear
The obstacle is treacherous fear
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #8 on: January 18, 2017, 10:13:50 pm »
I'm-prisoned

For a soul who's free
Who would have guess
The ironic fee
That causes all this mess

Restrained by myself
Thoughts are my chains
The anticipated prophecy of two thousand twelfth
But this complex remains
The gorgeous impulse
Surging through my brain
To lock it up inside
Is the true pain

This cell has a Window
This hell has a door
But they taunt me from the ceiling
When I am stuck on the floor

My salvation and hope
Reached down from the light
But I need to cope
And find out what's right

It's brilliancy
An idea so fancy
Really quite majestic
Simulation electric

But the paper is blank
I am the one to thank
For my heart sank
In this prison's dank

I want to be free...
But this trap-- is me.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #9 on: January 21, 2017, 12:23:30 am »
Tainted Words

A filthy slate
Words filled with hate
Rended from the lashes
Filled with plenty of bashes

A receipt of my past
Not something I can get passed
Not something I can stand for
It's something that attacks my core

I sang the red
With my fangs I led
Struggling to climb
Then shot down from the ledge

Is there no peace
Will the anger ever cease
Can I contain a beast
Can I hide it at least

I HATE IT ALL
I HOPE IT FALLS
ENOUGH OF THIS TRASH
IT'S MY TURN TO LASH

I DON'T GIVE A DAMN
I'M SHOWING WHO I AM
To ignore it will be trouble
To act on it will leave rubble

It courses through my veins
It drives me insane
The dark history
It's not a mystery

I should close my gate
I am not in a proper state
I don't want to hate
Unfortunately it is my fate
To bare this filthy slate
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #10 on: January 21, 2017, 12:29:33 am »
Can definitely feel the emotion in your writing.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #11 on: January 21, 2017, 08:04:48 pm »
A section on reflection

A still air
An empty room
Leeching my oxygen
Will lead to my doom

It's the truth
I wanted to hide
I kept it secret
Never to confide

I know how to end my story
How to go with no glory
Painless and fast
And it's not gory

The dissatisfaction
To have so much
To have it all and such
But not even enjoy a fraction

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
THE TORTURE THE PAIN
To escape is unjust

Please please I beg
On both knees from leg
Give me what I desire
A situation so dire

The final hope
The final stroke
The final wish
The final request
... Lest I be laid to rest.

So close
Almost there
I can almost see
BUT IT'S NOT WHAT I NEED

WHAT THE HELL
I CAN'T GET OUT OF THIS SHELL
THIS UNQUENCHED HUNGER
NEEDS TO QUELL

Stop lying
Stop trying
Stop denying
Stop crying

Collapsed on the ground
Hearing the sound
Of my calm breaths
Approaching death

A tired gaze
I look up
And through the haze
I see my special pup

My saviour
Not that of above
But can change my behaviour
Through the power of love

I long for one to call my own
Wishing for that special guy
I hope so badly to see
Our threads of destiny tie

I'm so lonely
A phony
The dream of a miracle...
... If only.



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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #12 on: January 22, 2017, 03:15:01 pm »
Again, and again, and again...

A sudden bliss
I'm not a fan
This desperate feeling
Has come over me again

And again
And again
And again
I fled and I ran

How could this happen to me
When will I learn
This flame that deceives me
And leaves me with a burn

A selfish dream
What does it mean
To feel it's warmth
It's what I've seen

I thought that I couldn't
Or at least know that I shouldn't
These emotions I had
I knew they were bad
But that doesn't mean that I wouldn't

It doesn't help to look
Though it's probably best to forget
All the steps that took
And I'm still full of regret

Imagine reciprocation
That is the goal
To make it to that location
Costs a heavy toll

A message hopefully unreadable
Breaking it a way
Will hopefully stop in your path
Or even lead astray
A code that is so unbeatable
To keep you thinking all day
Even if you did all the math
You'd still be kept at bay

If I can't confess I'll never rest
It's the guilty pleasure
You can hear my hidden fear
It can't be measured.

So I start all over again
Start from step one of the plan
Maybe it's my destiny
So I do what I can
For you and me.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #13 on: January 27, 2017, 03:04:21 am »
Evident

As it would appear
I can't conquer my fears
Even with the support
Of those I call peers

As it would show
That there's nothing I know
To stop these ideas
Making my anxiety grow

As it would seem
There's not even a gleam
No light at all
Not even a beam

As it would look
All the pain I took
Was all for naught
I'm caught on some hook

As it would visualise
I could anticipate a demise
And while it might shock
It may not surprise

As it would sight
I should try to fight
And it would be easy
If I could accept what is right

But it will worsen
Damn right I'll be cursin'
When I try to beat my enemy
Because I am that person.

Modest Mania

If you want the truth
Step up to my both
I'm here to tell
Of a special hell

Not one of torture
Not one of a jail
But one of emptiness
Save the stormy hail

This is not a real place
It's right behind your face
It's where you can find
That it's inside your mind

The problem her is to ask
Yes exactly that, it's the task
Of pleasing one another
Trying to wear a happy mask

But deep down
I seem to frown
Seemingly unable to take
All these compliments because they seem fake

If I'm to be more clear
You might need to get a seer
Because to most it won't make sense
They won't give it a single pence

It's all about ideas you create
Once you start you open a flood gate
But all floods eventually end
So wait for it to fill and extend

It's awesome
To crazy
Want to show
But too lazy

You can never understand
What exactly one could have at hand
For it might not actually be there
But doesn't mean it's not something they bare

I want to show you my special fiction
Unfortunately an inadequate description
Because I'm too afraid to show what I made
So I decide to hide it in the shade

To undermine oneself
May not be good for your health
But too far is not much help
When you're merely just a whelp

I wish people would take interest
But not just there for a test
But instead there as my guest
As I try to organise what's been messed

But I stop
And I drop
And I hop
Over it all
I would like to share
If only they would care
So I wouldn't have tear
Down at all
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #14 on: January 27, 2017, 04:12:07 pm »
Hmm, I think my favorite is "A section on reflection". Like others said, you do a good job of capturing emotion, and describing scenarios without being super specific. have you posted your work anywhere else?
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #15 on: January 27, 2017, 04:41:41 pm »
Hmm, I think my favorite is "A section on reflection". Like others said, you do a good job of capturing emotion, and describing scenarios without being super specific. have you posted your work anywhere else?

No, it's nothing really that important that I would want to show off. I'm content with just having it here on FT.

Ingraining rain

Tears fall from the sky
Like bullets they fly
Crashing into the ground
Hearing their pattering sound

Waters flow
Into the unknown
Streams are rushing
Making a splashy tone

It's a metaphor
The rain crashing down on me
Let me explain please

I go above cloud nine
Visit there all the time

It's why I can be happy
And feel safe to be sappy

But I can't stay forever
For the powerful force of weather

Pulls me back
Puts me back on track

And like rain I fall
Reality calls

Seeing my light pulled away
And brought back to dismay

I can do all that I want
But it will still taunt

The droplets pour down
I feel like I'll drown
I look to the sky
I struggle and a try

I get pulled under
Dampened crashing thunder
I'm submerged
Pulled towards an urge

Here there's no rain
Only pain
Plenty of disdain
It's my bane

As much as I may avoid it
I was the one who employed it
And it haunts me now
And I don't know how

When I escape the sea
When I try to flee
If I fail I cry
But if I succeed

I'm brought back to the rain
Whoa bamboozled again
You thought it was salvation
But that's not my destination

A cycle of bother
Very much like water

Lift like evaporation
Collect like condensation
Fall like precipitation
The sea sends it's invitation

The storm sings a never ending song
This is the place where I belong.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #16 on: January 31, 2017, 06:43:18 pm »
The roast of double post.

For many it has happend before
Perhaps you didn't know
Or you weren't paying attention
But every time it blows

The eminent humiliation
Already stemmed from frustration
You made a mistake
And a punishment you'll take

A huge banner
Showing your lake of manners
A mark of the fool
The opposite of cool

So much cringe
Your tears are unhinged
As you stare at your fail
Your face turns pale
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #17 on: January 31, 2017, 11:05:18 pm »
I really love your poetry. I can feel what you're trying to convey in every poem clearly.

You're very skilled at this.
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #18 on: January 31, 2017, 11:08:23 pm »
I really love your poetry. I can feel what you're trying to convey in every poem clearly.

You're very skilled at this.

Oh it's really not a big deal, but thanks for the compliment.  :blush-fox:
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Re: Dyno's Literature Thread.
« Reply #19 on: February 04, 2017, 08:20:29 pm »
I am sorry
for being me
no need to worry
I'm about to leave

There's nothing left for me to believe

My space, my happy box
the fandom where I'm a happy fox
meeting people with interesting talks
All distorted by mental blocks

The real agony comes from inside
Sometimes tears come from me eyes
Am I sensitive or just broken
My pride leaves words unspoken

I can't take help anymore
My capacity for gratitude is poor
I never deserved help in the first place
My only chance now... is to hide my face

I'm a shame
a pain
so lame
broken and messed
stubborn and unblessed
Am disdained
am deranged

please give up on this soul
I have already dug myself a hole
A place that is so cold
Toss in my cards and fold

I'm full of it
Definitely not fit
I deserve what's coming to me
That is something I can admit

I lay to rest in my pit

Don't talk about the emotion
this story is just a notion
that all I do is cause commotion
Maybe a poison is my potion

Don't show me the light of day
I don't want it anyway
I'll hide myself from every ray
It just works that way

In the end
I can't defend
can't ascend
no chance... to amend
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