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Here's a poem thread.
« on: May 30, 2017, 12:45:34 pm »
Not exactly sure where this would fit.
In artwork is not where I would put it.

For it is more like music, in the sense,
that it rhymes, similarly, and the words are dense.

And also if one is to rhyme.
It could be put to music in time.

I never will claim to be a professional poet.
I expect criticism, so please, if you wish, show it.



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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2017, 02:03:07 pm »
Can you help me write lyrics for a song?
Its called turn it back around/change there minds
I want it to be kind of an anthem against intolerance
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« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2017, 02:04:30 pm »
Can you help me write lyrics for a song?
Its called turn it back around/change there minds
I want it to be kind of an anthem against intolerance
Sure. If I understand correctly, it's about punk rock?
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« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2017, 02:08:28 pm »
Can you help me write lyrics for a song?
Its called turn it back around/change there minds
I want it to be kind of an anthem against intolerance
Sure. If I understand correctly, it's about punk rock?
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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2017, 02:15:34 pm »
Can you help me write lyrics for a song?
Its called turn it back around/change there minds
I want it to be kind of an anthem against intolerance
Sure. If I understand correctly, it's about punk rock?
Yeah C:

Here's what come to mind first.

Verse 1:
Joan Jet. The Sex Pistols.
The Cult. The Ramones.
It's a good type of music.
That just happens to carry intense tones.

Chorus:
Why can't we just Change Their Minds
It's not like I'm singing to make up a rhyme.
Why can't we just Change Their Minds
It's a popular genre in many people's minds.

Insert Accentual Music Here

Verse 2:
It started in the 60s.
It was part of culture in the 80s.
It included some of best male artists.
But no, we can't forget the ladies.

Chorus
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2017, 01:06:13 pm »
The Great Wars (WWI, WWII, Cold War, ?)

Reminiscent of the Archduke,
whose death sparked a war.
Reminiscent of the 40s,
where the sequel brought more.

Turmoil and Triumph.
Life and Death.
Technology and Torture.
Plutonium, and Queen Elizabeth.

Why must it be like this?

'Cause turmoil is triumph,
from a different point of view,
and life will cause death.
It's nothing new.

Islands to the South.
Enemies in the East.
They've nuclear weapons,
and we don't care in the least.

Why must it be like this?

'Cause government is structure,
and because if you don't agree.
All entities will be after you;
Just wait and see.

The World is in turmoil;
On deep downward spin.
We're coming up on more war,
but this time no one will win.



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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2017, 09:18:41 pm »
Anime and Manga

Anime and Manga,
are varieties of art.
Anime is animated.
Mangas are booklets where stories take part.

Many avoid this art,
because of some horrid adults,
but it is mostly clean art.
Sadly there are inappropriate Google results.

I like manga and anime.
Many people really do.
I was thinking of making anime of mine own.
Might be one who likes anime you?


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« Reply #7 on: June 07, 2017, 09:25:54 pm »
Hypocrite

The dictionary definition,
of a Hypocrite,
is one who says one thing,
but then in another sense denies it.

You can see it on the television.
You see it in books.
You see it in movies.
Nothing in this world is how it looks.

I myself am guilty of being one.
But aren't all like that.
Can you claim to be true?
Full truth is something that we all lack.

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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #8 on: June 08, 2017, 04:03:43 pm »
Love

To be logical,
you can't.
Love is not logic.
Thought of that, you hadn't.

Love is amazing,
but has not been defined.
Those that tried to define it,
went out of their mind.

Love can be odd,
but no love is wrong.
Love is for everyone,
and can be found in every song.


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« Reply #9 on: June 08, 2017, 04:22:14 pm »
You've some nice poetry! I quite like your style of writing.
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« Reply #10 on: June 08, 2017, 04:34:14 pm »
You've some nice poetry! I quite like your style of writing.
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« Reply #11 on: June 09, 2017, 06:48:56 pm »
Once Upon a Time - The Story of the Brothers Grimm

Once Upon a Time,
in a faraway land.
Lands lush with trees.
Lands dry with sand.

Once Upon a Time,
in a land faraway.
Land called Persia.
Land called Hungary.

Once Upon a Time,
in a castle far off.
Fairy tales were written.
Fairy tales were lost.

Once Upon a Time,
in middle age Germany.
Some brothers' asked for stories.
Stories they got, we see.

Once Upon a Time,
in modern America.
Walt Disney, was thinking.
And created movies like Cinderella.

Once Upon a Time,
the brothers' got no credit.
They weren't here to complain.
They weren't here to get it.

Once Upon a Time,
they were left behind.
It's rare that a very young child,
their compilation will enjoy and find.

Once Upon a Time,
the good brothers Grimm,
did all that work, for the world,
but in the end nothing did they win.


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« Reply #13 on: June 17, 2017, 04:46:16 pm »
Compaq Motherboard

The one motherboard,
that has had it's use,
in computers of two different companies,
and has had it's verbal abuse.

From the Presario,
to the Pavilion,
they're motherboards had branding,
that made their quality that of the American.

Such Compaq products,
we're never respected,
until after Hewlett Packard owned them,
and yet Compaq could not claim it.


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« Reply #14 on: June 22, 2017, 03:02:21 pm »
Infinite Life

To quote a very intelligent man,
"Who wants to live forever?"
Certainly we would if we ever can,
but now read this poem that would be better written as a letter:

Oh, life we see as something precious.
A person is but tainted if they don't.
But death we see as a foe nauxious.
But avoid death we won't.

But now think. Life is quite good.
But at other times, we see, it's quite bad.
Life for a good chunk of time, continue it should.
Should not have death among the friends of a young lad.

But focusing on the bad, suicide,
Is what some turn to, but even so this is wrong.
Although life may not be on your side,
It has been orchestrated to be the right length long.

Any longer, we'd go beyond realization of death.
Any shorter, we'd not truly understand life.
And so is it truly a good idea to never have death,
When to the perfect length of life, we have a slice?

Truly, they who should want to live forever,
Know not what they say.
They only of good life and good weather,
Not of having a bad day.

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« Reply #15 on: July 05, 2017, 10:31:09 pm »
In Black and White

*starts in real world*

Will I ever see you my love,
my eternal love?

Inside of this manga I read,
I can forever imagine,
you and I together,
but so, you're the one girl, I can never win.

I'd tell it to you.
I'd tell you that I love you,
all in black and white.

I'd tell it all to you.
I'd tell you I want to be with you,
all in black and white.

*falls asleep onto the manga novel, and disappears into it*

How did you do that my love,
my eternal love?

Inside of this manga I see,
I need never again imagine,
you and I together,
for now, you're the girl I need not win.

Together we are here.
Here in the manga, where I can love you.
Here in black and white.

Together we are here.
Here in this temporary world of dream.
Here in black and white.

I need leave you my love,
my eternal love.

I must depart from this manga,
where all I imagine could be real.
I must depart from here,
for I know this is but a dream, not real.

I must depart from you.
I must depart from this world of dream.
I must depart from the black and white

I must depart from you.
I must depart from this wonder-world of manga.
I must depart from the black and white.

*wakes up from manga*

(I'd tell it to you.
I'd tell you that I love you,
all in black and white

I'd tell it all to you.
I'd tell you I want to be with you,
all in black and white.)

edit: Fixed some grammar mistakes, and typos.

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« Reply #16 on: July 05, 2017, 10:38:27 pm »
I love it! I'd love to hear it sung :0
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« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2017, 10:39:42 pm »
I love it! I'd love to hear it sung :0
Thanks. When I get a chance I'll record it.
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« Reply #18 on: July 06, 2017, 05:04:08 pm »
Here's what I submitted for the writing contest, in the theme of nostalgia, in the form of poem.

Long Ago
A Nostalgic Remembrance of Knowledge Lost


Now knowledge is at the touch of your fingers,
but lo, for those who remember the memory lingers,
of knowledge that required reading of a book,
of knowledge that actually requires one for it to look.

Such knowledge has but been transmuted you say.
It has been put into a format that is readable in the modern day.
But then again, not all has been rewritten as such.
In fact, the fraction of it, that has been, is not very much.

Some still find their joy, in reading a knowledgeable book,
but so few yet are these people, who look to read in their little nook.
So many are rather those who use the internet 'cyclopædia,
instead of using these traditional versions of the same media.

Behold, will books and 'cyclopædias ever have their comeback,
where the world will once again have it's intelligence back?
Will we ever gain what was once lost to stupidity,
ever gain it back in not dreams but in reality?

The answer provided by several sources, is no, and no always.
The times of the educated human beings are in past days.
Maybe one day, if all modernity is taken from them,
we will have several educated people once again.

Spoken from an imagined point of view, outside of the human race.
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« Reply #19 on: July 06, 2017, 05:18:35 pm »
Itz booteeful

I should start doing poetry again some time..
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