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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #20 on: July 06, 2017, 05:22:11 pm »
Itz booteeful

I should start doing poetry again some time..
Thanks. And I encourage you to do poetry. It's an amazing art form.
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #21 on: July 09, 2017, 03:46:12 pm »
Here's what happens when you want to stop spamming, the forum is a bit quiet, and your obsessed with SID.
A sucky translation of And Boyfriend by SID. Originally written by Mao. Originally composed by Yuuya. Translated by me. I don't know if it's poetic enough to record.
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And Boyfriend (Translation)

Be it early with the dew, or after the last train leaves the station,
They're cute in their own way, but they seem insignificant, me overlooking them.
I myself will have fun with my wonderful boyfriend. There is no one that can stop us.
“I'm still your girlfriend for the time of today.”, I run my fingers across the back of him.

Back when, we were only friends, the distance between us was unbearable, was it not?
Now since the distance has gotten smaller, we're being somewhat egotistic; is this really how love works?

From “like” to “love”, with hands held, on a road where U-turns are not allowed, to my dismay.

My love had begun to feel somewhat old, just like the booties I used to wear.
It was not the matter, if the color didn't match me; sneakers fit me better anyway.
Even so, I want to be with you, and try to align my steps with yours.
Whenever we hold hands, the difference in our attitude, compelled me to kiss you, fix it hurriedly.

Am I seeing the side of your face more frequently, or is that just me?
Lately, has not the speed of your reply gotten almost too fast?

I craved your jealousy, but on a night when I devised a plan, I ended with great damage.

It's not “Farewell” nor “Goodbye”, for we are still close enough so we can still see each other.
It doesn't feel like we're back with what it used to be. Everything is in his hands.
The sounds of yet another girl, seemingly so much better than me, are now approaching you.
I changed back into my sneakers, stopped trying to look taller, and wept to myself, where all dead love lands.

I myself will have fun with my wonderful friend. There is no one that can stop us.
“From today on I am but your feminine friend.”, but until you leave me,
I will still love you dearly.

Song meaning, flow, and original is SID's.
I do not claim the song.
Translation is written by me.
Credit the respective creators depending on how you use it.
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #22 on: July 26, 2017, 09:54:19 pm »
Well, it's not poetry in a traditional sense. But, here's a song I wrote for a person, but for privacy reasons I won't reveal.
To the tune of Greensleeves:

私はあなたを愛しているので、私を憎むことはありません。
Watashi ha anata o aishi te iru node, watashi o nikumu koto ha ari mase n.
I love you, so do not hate me.

KANJI:
私はあなたについて夢見ていました。
何回も繰り返した。

ああ、私は本当にあなたを愛しています。
ああ、私を憎むな。

私はあなたが私の考えを疑問に思いました。
私が夢中になるまで私は思った。

ああ、私は本当にあなたを愛しています。
ああ、私を憎むな。

さて、この最後のセクションでは、
私はあなたにキスを送る。

ああ、私は本当にあなたを愛しています。
ああ、私を憎むな。


ROUMAJI:
Watashi ha anata nitsuite yumemi te i mashi ta.
Nan kai mo kurikaeshi ta.

Aa, watashi ha hontouni anata o aishi te i masu.
Aa, watashi o nikumu na.

Watashi ha anata ga watashi no kangae o gimon ni omoi mashi ta.
Watashi ga muchuu ni naru made watashi ha omotta.

Aa, watashi ha hontouni anata o aishi te i masu.
Aa, watashi o nikumu na.

Sate, kono saigo no sekushon de ha,
watashi ha anata ni kisu o okuru.

Aa, watashi ha hontouni anata o aishi te i masu.
Aa, watashi o nikumu na.


ENGLISH:
I had a dream about you.
I repeated it many times.

Oh, I truly love you.
Oh, do not hate me.

I wondered what you thought of me.
I thought until I was crazy.

Oh, I truly love you.
Oh, do not hate me.

Well, in this last section,
I send a kiss to you.

Oh, I truly love you.
Oh, do not hate me.

Please credit me if you use.

Note: A slight difference in the translation method of the Japanese title, gives an alternate meaning:

I love you, so do not hate me.
or
I love you, yet I will never ever get you.
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #23 on: July 27, 2017, 01:45:54 am »
I love these! Your And Boyfriend translation is wonderful, too. Funnily enough, that's the first SID song I ever heard!
That song you wrote is really beautiful. I love it. ^-^
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« Reply #24 on: July 27, 2017, 09:09:04 am »
I love these! Your And Boyfriend translation is wonderful, too. Funnily enough, that's the first SID song I ever heard!
That song you wrote is really beautiful. I love it. ^-^
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #25 on: July 30, 2017, 08:12:23 pm »
Here's what happens when you're trying to write songs, and you just watched Willy Wonka and The Chocolate Factory.

The Factory


"There is no life I know to compare with pure imagination. Living there, you'll be free if you truly wish to be."

His name was William,
Wonka was the last.
He loved chocolate,
but with his waistline, you'd think he'd been on fast.

Willy was what he went by.
Willy Wonka was his name.
Perhaps, you've heard his story,
But, even at this point, his love of chocolate was the same.

He had faith that others would too love chocolate,
He built himself a factory to make more known of it.

That factory. The factory.
That chocolate and candy manufactury.
Willy Wonka's factory.
His chocolate and candy manufactury.

Now the local candyman,
knew not what he was to do.
Wonka came in his shop,
And gave him but "Wonka Bars" two.

The man, felt he owed a taste.
He unwrapped and bid taste of it.
He love the taste so very much,
he didn't open the other one, but instead got another to taste of it.

The product of that factory, of Wonka's bright idea,
sold well from that shop now, Wonka saw.

That factory. The factory.
That chocolate and candy manufactury.
Willy Wonka's factory.
His chocolate and candy manufactury.

And so down in town,
where the factory now is,
the gates are locked well,
for fear that Wonka's chocolate would be stolen by th'ivs.

Wonka slowly spent more and more time in his factory,
Time spent making chocolate and candies in his manufactury.

That factory. The factory.
That chocolate and candy manufactury.
Willy Wonka's factory.
His chocolate and candy manufactury.

Quotes, the name Willy Wonka, the brand Wonka, are copyright of their respective owners.

R.I.P. Gene Wilder.
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Also, I wrote this one. Linked to my DeviantArt and labeled "Mature" because it's ideologically sensitive. I originally wrote it while somewhat suicidal and quite depressed, and I don't know how much of that theme carried into the lyrics. It's gonna be track 9 on my new album.
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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #26 on: August 03, 2017, 09:21:15 pm »
Here's what happens when you watch Overboard half-way through, fall asleep, wake up near the ending, and fall asleep again. I know the movie has a happy ending but I missed it so here's the song I wrote during:

Dazed and Confused


Well, what've you planned,
When I was Dazed and Confused?
When we're finished am I,
Gonna feel like I've been used?

Well, now you've got me;
You've got me Dazed and Confused.
Later that night I sat,
And thought that I'd been abused.

Are you happy?
You had control of me,
When I was Dazed and Confused.

Was that true love?
How did I remotely love you,
When I was Dazed and Confused.

Well, what did you do to me,
When I was Dazed and Confused?
Cause when I came back to reality,
I felt like I'd been used.

Well, did you really think I loved you,
When I was Dazed and Confused?
Did you really think that us two, you and me,
Were in any way fused?

Are you happy?
You had control of me,
When I was Dazed and Confused.

Was that true love?
How did I remotely love you,
When I was Dazed and Confused.

When I was Dazed and Confused,
I was used and abused.
When I was Dazed and Confused,
I don't need an excuse;
You had me Dazed and Confused.

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Re: Here's a poem thread.
« Reply #27 on: August 29, 2017, 10:57:46 pm »
Oh my God; Why am I posting? Anyway, here's the link. Ideologically sensitive. It probs sounds like gibberish. Sorry if I offend anyone. You have been warned. I wrote this last night, and didn't remember it until I found an odd document on my desktop this evening.

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