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Friends - Song WIP
« on: June 18, 2017, 06:58:56 am »
(Verse 1)
Dear August/Sam/Bailey/(gender Neutral name, still thinking of ideas),
We haven't talk in a while my dear...
Friend.
Ever since our relationship met an
End~
So, do you mind if I inquire?
A little Admir-ation~?
Because, its true,
I adore you,

(Chorus)
So, Why don't we make amends?
And Stay..
Just friends.
Just, Friends~
Yeah, Friends.

(Hook)
So, lets get to the backstory
So I can explore the,
Motion of...
Breaking up.

(Verse 2)
When people split,
They either end it
or make up.
We took the former,
Now we were no more
But I still adore
A Relationship
(with you)
But hey, That's fine
That we cut it off,
And from what I know of,
You moved on.
An I don't mean to be sappy,
But...

I'm kinda sad your ignoring me =/


(Chorus)
So, Why don't we make amends?
And Stay..
Just friends.
Just, Friends~
Yeah, Friends.

(Ending)
Ohhhh woahhh-
Friends~
We can stay,
Why don't we stay,
cause we can, staayy~
Friends.



(This song is kinda based off of how I never see songs where the people break up and they are just chill with each other. Its always, Oh, you cheated on me, now i miss/hate you! Sorry if its cruddy ^^')
« Last Edit: June 18, 2017, 07:01:15 am by Skylar/Tots »
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Re: Friends - Song WIP
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2017, 10:04:19 am »
It's nice. The rhyming pattern is especially unique.
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