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Writing junk (mainly just short stories)
« on: July 01, 2017, 11:38:38 pm »
I do a lot of writing but I haven't done any recently
I like to write horror and fantasy
But mainly horror for short stories
Some of you may remember this thread beep

Here's a little horror story

My eyes shot open, feeling myself drenched in cold sweat I heard a loud tapping sound. tap tap tap. I couldn't pinpoint where it was coming from but it seem to be coming from underneath me. I leaned over and peaked under my bed. TAP TAP TAP. It grew louder but there was nothing there. I got onto the floor and proceeded to place my ear against the hard wood surface. That was odd it was coming from below the floor. The tapping ceased. My eyes went wide because various incoherent mumbling voices took it's place. I was paralyzed from fear. I tried with all my will to get up but it was like I was glued to the floor. Along with the eerie mumbling it sounded like someone was scratching on the other side of the floor. Suddenly I felt a hand on my back. My heart beat got quicker when I turned my head around and saw nobody. The feeling was still there. I then felt another on my leg. The same happened to my arm. After a few seconds of nothing new happening the invisible hand like forces started to dig what felt like claws into my skin. I looked at my arm and saw blood but still nothing physical around it. The pain was getting unbearable. The sounds under the floor became shrieking. I closed my eyes tightly, hoping that it would end any second. I felt a breath against my ear. It sounded like it was saying something now but I was too light headed to focus. My vision went black. When I woke up the next afternoon I got all my stiff together and left. I still don't know what happened to me that night, but I wasn't planning on experiencing it again.

This is a really really rough draft
I know its not good but I'm gonna be working on it a lot oops
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Re: Writing junk (mainly just short stories)
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2017, 11:42:11 pm »
Ooh, creepy. It's pretty good for a rough draft!
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Re: Writing junk (mainly just short stories)
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2017, 08:41:35 am »
For the fact that it's a rough draft it has a fairly detailed and worked out storyline. It's cool.
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