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Offline furry blue fox

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A rap song I wrote
« on: June 08, 2009, 01:57:13 pm »
I remember all the people that i thought i knew
back-stabbers, but i never had a fucking clue
Shake my hand and smile with a fuckin laugh
but your fingers were crossed behind your fuckin back

I crawled to you with some hope in my eyes
All along a fuckin loyal dingo in disguise
But i got my love
and just a few true friends
cuz remember
thats all that matters in the fuckin end

I dont need your fuckin bullshit lies anymore
its time i packed my shit and headed for the fucking door
I gave you my heart and i trusted you
but i cant live with the bullshit that you put me through

Your stuck in a room with no fuckin doors
You yell for help but nobody cares about you anymore
I took your hand and was hoping for some family
Not knowing you were just gonna get rid of me

I opened up to you and told you all of my personal shit
But you were just sitting there
wondering if it was legit

I came here
looking for some help for me
not knowing that
you were never gonna be family

All i wanted was a little trust from you
But now look at all the shit you've drug me through

As i lie here i hope that you will cry for me
I needed your help but all you did was lie to me

Im sick of your facades How would you feel if i did that to you
pretend to care, but not even have a fuckin clue,
how important that you all were to me
put the barrel in my mouth
i wanna sleep for all eternity


This is just a song i wrote the other night. I might actually make a beat and start rapping and actually make my first lyrical rap.

Tell me what you guys think. I'll be here.
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Re: A rap song I wrote
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 04:23:59 am »
Nice. I rap myself, it's quite fun actually. I'd like to hear this one man
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Re: A rap song I wrote
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 07:38:52 am »
Wow... Blue, that was deep.

And sadly... I know that in order to write something as hard-hitting and as personal as that, that you have been through what is portrayed in this song.

This just goes to show that even in a place where you are "supposed" to be welcomed with open arms and be part of a community where everyone should be treated equal, society doesn't work that way. As they are outcasted, the "freaks" and the socially inept also outcast others, not realizing they are repeating the same process over and over.

Keep up the good work, Blue. You've really got talent here. <3
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